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I need feedback on my new DNB track
http://soundcloud.com/defaultdnb/cit...-bass-invasion
I started working on this at 9 this morning and think I'm on to something here, but I need a little outside perspective. Here's hoping someone out there has a good ear for DNB like mr @GregoryRasputin ![]() Constructive criticism is always welcomed from anyone. Cheers in advance! CZD |
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Until 0:34 the effect is cool, but personally i don't like the *tune* or the chords used.
Then on 2:12 another good kickstart but i feel like it's too streched until again appears the beat of the song and starts again. It's not bad at all, that's what i feel when i heard it. No mean of disrepect of anything i like more *WHY* track. Regards good work.
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Nice one mate, cheers for the input. Funny enough I'm listening to "why" right now. Love that track
![]() Every so often I get these weird ideas/sounds in my head and getting them down into a track 1:1 is really tough. I'll take what you say on board and see if a v2 materializes :P Thanks again
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Yeah im checking your other tracks very cool work
![]() But why track it's awesome. Keep the good work!!
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It's the best way to keep improving :P when i done sometime ago a thing on the guitar with traktor, etc i asked the same thing to being honest.
I gave up for the moment for the lack of time, but it's good to have a nice feedback even if some punk ass critices in a bad manner. (always happens). But it's a good thing to keep improving more. And you Nailed it on the other songs, so hope to listen the final work of Bass invasion
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V2 is underway changed the rhythm up a little, removed the synth that I think you didn't like, and added in some phat squelchy one-shot basses. Going to work on it more tonight, and hopefully I'll fire up a sample tomorrow.
Thanks again @hellsing9 for the good honest feedback. |
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Default im an old soldier from the metalheadz blue note dayz back in late 90s early 2000 in hoxton square. Just checked your tune.. gotta say mate your work is gettin there. This track uve uploaded is bang on, needs a bit off tweeking, il send it to a cpl off dnb headz i know twista dj dean wilson being one, hel get bak to me on it
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Mate that would be insanely awesome! Thank you very much!
I came into DNB listening to virus Ed Rush/Nico/Optical/Matrix/Bad Company, to name but a few, at secondary school and it blew me away. |
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im 36 how old r u? my first days were bukem @ speed and rage @ heaven also promised @ the end club....so long ago now lol. Ive sent tht track to him now fella
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