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Ok, I'm no English or American, but still I like to write a poem every now and then although, I do think they are kind of bad
![]() But still, here you go, you be the judges: Never knowing you Never knowing you was the best I could’ve hoped for For if I had knew you I wouldn’t have written this for sure You don’t know who I am And yet you are my inspiration... You are the morning sun shining bright You are the pale moonlight You are the relieve of torments You are the end to all laments These are my desperate words that will never be listened by you I don’t care You never knew me too And though you’ll never see me As I see you You can be aware That I will always be there Though... never knowing you |
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i remember when i was a fool
smoking weed, just trying to be cool. smoking bongs and toking buckets, eating mcdonald chicken nuggets
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So much hatred.
There is so much hatred, In all forms, and ways, too much depression that gets us deserted, So much sorrow all over not to be greeted, So much pain, that makes us hurt down deep, no flowers, no candy, no sweets, everywhere you go, everywhere you see all around people full of jealousy, Please stop, this insanity, Though just answer me this Why is there so much of hatred. Just made this up right now, from the top of my head, though not very much of poet. Hope you like
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The Night Sky
As I walk alone at night, I feel higher than a thousand kites, I'm concealed by a thousand shadows, And you're always in my sights. This was supposed to be about an assassin, and to an extent it's how I feel personally, about myself, but I did not know how to finish the poem, so I leave you with this.
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Now I stand under the sky,
Watching for the whites of your eye, Let us see if your last goodbye, Is just another lie, before you die. May you rest beneath the moon, As your soul and body is entombed, I know my my time is coming soon, Whispers of doom, fill the room. There is no more angels, We all killed them, the fallen god's children. Lost within the angles, Angel Assassins, in this dimensional labyrinth. I told them, I'm the writer!
Took away there one desire! In the night, their life hurts! But it's my curse! I'm a lifer...
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@Annelies
I almost reopened this thread myself (been doing some freestyle writing recently). Glad to see you crack it open again. Figured I'd add what you inspired me to
BTW, I think it all flows together pretty nicely, good job us!!!Anyways, here is my most recent written free-flow... We all have the power to control mother****ers; But what we lack is an army of thug brothers, A bunch of others from different mothers... What makes us the same is we all wonder; We all wander lost, in this paradox, Where lesson's are taught to those who fought... What you got, is a bunch of mother****ers like me; Who likely despise me, because they see me rising; It's not frightening, it's rather tantalizing. Yeah, I got the whole world feeling it, The girls says I'm killing it, I'm the new. Who the realest is? ************* [ - Post Merged - ] ************* As I walk alone at night, I feel higher than a thousand kites, I'm concealed by a thousand shadows, And you're always in my sights. Now I stand under the sky, Watching for the whites of your eye, Let us see if your last goodbye, Is just another lie, before you die. May you rest beneath the moon, As your soul and body is entombed, I know my time is coming soon, Whispers of doom, fill the room. There is no more angels, We all killed them, the fallen god's children. Lost within the angles, Angel Assassins, in this dimensional labyrinth. ... There is no more angels, We all killed them, the fallen god's children. Lost within the angles, Angel Assassins, in this dimensional labyrinth. *About Image: Artist - tthousand, from the JH/HS years...
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BEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAST!!! LOL
Really nice. ![]() Maybe I'll write another one later.
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Now...Lets pretend all of our dreams are real
we get to build, create, or steal. we never have a chance to lose or die, only we are truly alive In our dreams in our dreams everything comes true we never go around(pause)... feeling blue. we feel gifted, our spirits are lifted in the one place that is true to you. It needs some work
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This was the first poem I have ever written in English:
Free Soul Free soul flies freely with nature And both are in perfect harmony By just being free... This harmony is complete and fulfil them like nothing else does cause they can fly while others can only try… Free soul you have the world and you can explore it cause you have wings to fly like a bird, freely and without any disturb… Free Soul teach me how to fly without getting high, how to reach the goal when I don’t have your soul? Now I want to understand, All your freedom I want you to show me, That simple wisdom… Death Time and space started to fade As he started to suffocate Death was coming and he had no escape Shades of red, black and grey The beginning of his darkest day As he was taken away Two unknown strangers watched with pleasure His growing despair Death is coming And it ain’t fair But death comes without notice Without a face To take us all away To some ungrateful place And in the awakening of our desperate hour Everything shall fade... Fábio Silva My real name is the one above (first and surname). The second poem was written for a class, which I had during my degree called "Creative Writing". I hope you've enjoyed reading the poems
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