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Old 10-30-2012   #1
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a cd cover i did for a friend/RATE

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It's alright.

Here's a little constructive critique (please don't take it badly, it's things you can fix to make the image better imho):

The perspective and lighting are wrong on the car.

The lighting is wrong on the guy.

The guy isn't reflected in the car.

And is he "finger-framing" his junk?

6/10
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is this for a rap album? please say no
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Old 10-30-2012   #4
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Originally Posted by DEFAULTDNB View Post
It's alright.

Here's a little constructive critique (please don't take it badly, it's things you can fix to make the image better imho):

The perspective and lighting are wrong on the car.

The lighting is wrong on the guy.

The guy isn't reflected in the car.

And is he "finger-framing" his junk?

6/10

nope i know im nt good at gfx i obvs want people to tell me were im going wrong o try and get better thanks n finger jammin haha
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I think its a cool idea, apart from the guy on his knees beside the car, that just looks extremely weird >.<
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Old 10-30-2012   #6
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is this for a rap album? please say no
nope i gave him a better designer lol and this was just messing on PS but he sure can rap bro
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you could use another color for his name and replace the A in anarchy with this

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the thing that stands out the most it the overall quality of the piece mate, its very pixelated in places (i dont know if its the image or the image host), the second thing is the blending, if you send me the psd file i can have a little tweak if you want mate
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the thing that stands out the most it the overall quality of the piece mate, its very pixelated in places (i dont know if its the image or the image host), the second thing is the blending, if you send me the psd file i can have a little tweak if you want mate
I think it was the image host, I'm sure it didn't look that bad last night on my iPhone
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it was the ghost guy in the corner that first got my eye but its every where lol so i think your right, this is why i dont use photobucket (plus they limit your bandwidth )
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